Today our success criteria was to create a 100 word challenge. It has to be about a character . I chose to write about Schmaul the Jew. I hope you enjoy it.
The cold.
Once I was a kid playing football in the paddock with my brother in a warm nice house.
Then the Nazis came with their guns and batons. Now I am forced to live in the paddock I have no Idea where mother has gone or father. The only thing I am allowed to have is a calendar for all the months of hell I've been through. I pray to find mother and father.
August 03 1931
I am headed to a hut today I hope it is nice and warm. But something about this doesn't feel right, I’m going away.
Hi Cormac,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic book and movie. What have you learned that you didn't know before after reading some of this? What is the purpose of this post? Is this a quote from the story?
Keep up the great sharing,
Miss Blair :)
Hi Cormac
ReplyDeleteI really liked your 100wc it sounded a lot like a show not tell. But there are a couple typos it there.
Charlotte
Year 8
Drummond Primary School
Hi cormac,
ReplyDeleteI like your story it is really insisting. I wounder what happens next.
Blake
Year 6
Dummond school
Hello Cormac,
ReplyDeleteI think this short story is super cool and I really enjoyed reading it. I wonder what happens next.
Where did you get the idea to write about this?
Your sincerely Charlotte, Oamaru Intermediate School