For pet day we had to create a small description describing our pets, can you guess what mine is?
Pet description
Deep brown eyes look deep into your soul. Small droopy ears cascade over her small head. A oval like body only brings back the pain of her partners death. A thick straight tail, always wagging. Four skinny legs with paws at the end of them. As far as cuteness goes she is one of a kind. Straight blonde streaks coat her large body. To us she is not just a pet she is a member of our family. Thick strands of blonde fur streak across her body. A tiny ring of brown sit delicately around her neck. As soon as you see her chubby underbelly she’s no longer a vicious animal but an excellent pet. Short thin stripes of brown hiding amongst the blonde. Muculent drool covers her red tongue.
A deep growl erupts when the small pot bellied beast attacks. Its ear piercing whimper acts as a white flag for their kind, symbolic of her ability to surrender. An angry snarl is heard when a brawl takes place. The slobbery sneeze sprays muculent saliva everywhere. Claws sounding like high heels on concrete.
A joyous wag of her brown tail reflects her caring personality. She lets out a protective bark every time a bike or pedestrian. She’s treated like a queen -not even moving a finger. But all in all she is the best pet ever and we love her .
Hi Cormac
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting story. I like that you have added interesting adjectives.
Khali
Room 4
Cormac
ReplyDeleteyou seem to have hit the nail on the head there . you have a short fat lazy dog with bleached stripes? reminds me of someone?? it is clear you like your dog and she is special how was her partner killed.
Have you repeated your description in the narrative? have you read and edited your writing before you published this. Well done clear where you are from.
Leo