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Thursday 31 August 2017

character description

For this past week we have made character description we had to choose either a person we know in real life or a character from our novel for our third novel study we had to write about their face, skin, actions and personality.

Her shimmering blonde hairs sat neatly in a ponytail. It swayed whenever she ran.  
Her pale face reflects the glow from her hair. Two friendly blue eyes always gently gazed at me.A bright smile emerged at least 20 times a day. She always sat perfectly upright, like she had been raised in a really posh private school. Her joy was so huge that at any moment you would think her smile would explode.
Miss De Wolde’s white skin shone like snow in the daylight. Her face was covered in makeup on. Her shiny nose piercing stood out like a single tree in an empty paddock.

She loved to talk about her farm and about how she was named after a peculiar thing. I remember that she was named after a cow!
She often spoke of her  home country and how all the houses squeezed together not much like New Zealand. Miss De Wolde had an enthusiastic voice. She was a very friendly teacher and everybody liked her.She always laughed when someone has done something wrong and could never really punish us properly!

Her athleticism was only the tip of the iceberg - who knew that she was also smart, friendly and a great teacher. The victim of loads of blonde jokes.  Her enthusiasm for PE was unimaginable she played multiple sports she got into the CSC first 15 women's rugby team. She was here from 6:00 am to 5:00 pm.

She excelled in everything she tried with us. We didn’t know what we had until we lost her. To Heddon Bush.

Thursday 10 August 2017

Prose Piece


I am learning to write a piece of prose  a sketch with detailed words, about a particular PERSON , that is very important to me to do this we had to create an ANV chart. Our success criteria was for it to be a story not a list of our ANV.


His personality accepts every challenge like a stride. Dull brown freckles scattered like debris on a destroyed city. Short brown hair always the same every morning. His blood red ears protrude like trees in an open plane. Bony fingers stick out of a rough hand.His kind smile creates happiness in everyone around, and his great jokes never fail to make everyone laugh.

Tuesday 1 August 2017

Novel study

This is a poem about the house in Berlin from the boy in the striped pj's.  I read the book and whatched the movie to help me describe it. I also used an A.N.V chart to describe the scene and the scenario. What do you think?
The House in Berlin was nice Enough.  It had Five floors, a long banister and a big dining room that was filled of memories.A big room with books and colourful toys. A hanging window that could see the whole city.I did what any boy would do I explored giant, expensive house Walking around Berlin with my best friends for life. Playing, laughing listening Doing everything important