This week this 100 word challenge is about Andrew. He is a V.S.O (voluntary service overseas) We were writing a letter to Andrew. About is job delivering babies.
Dear Andrew,
Today must have been tough. Delivering babies is tough work. With two lives always at risk who knows what will happen. How many times were you half awake and fell asleep in a patient's house? How hard is the pressure? What was the hardest job? With this job how many people have named their babies after you or was it just one person? With a job like this how important is self confidence? Do you have a wife and kids or not? Is this job the most important thing or is it something else?
Yours Sincerely,
Cormac Marron
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cormac,
You are a very good writer. It is fulled with very good questions. Why do you think Andrew does it?
Carlyn
Drummond
Hi carlyn thanks for the positive feedback
DeleteCormac this is good work. I feel you are demonstrating and recording your great imagination and attention to detail.
ReplyDeleteI like how you are able to reflect on your work and see just how good it is and where you can improve.
You need to work on making it more interesting as this is where you have said you need to improve
The work on the class blog is AMAZING and good reading thanks.
sorry Michael Marron not Cormac above
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