This week we are learning to change our openings for sentences the prompt was 'what do I need now.'
“What do I need now, nachos”
among the rubble Nachos. I had to get to my house before anyone notices. Deep voices echoing; they are coming this way, i sprint past the rubble and jump in the hole. Five minutes later Joseph comes with a paper bag.
“Medicine” I whisper. Joseph nods
“it’ll be worth $500, (sigh) if we sell it t…”
“no!” I interrupt.
“ Can I have some” Pointing to the lukewarm nachos.
“I hear they are having a raid tonight.”
“oh yea” I say. A rock falls onto the floor.
“ The raid it’s here!” I scream.
“AAA I've been shot!"
By Cormac
By Cormac
massive work Cormac. you seem to have got inside the mind of the boy in the striped pyjamas. i find this is a great way to see what you are doing on a daily basis. you are doing great work keep up the good work.
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